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Have you ever loved someone so much, you'd give an arm for?
Not the expression, no, literally give an arm for?
When they know they're your heart
And you know you were their armour
And you will destroy anyone who would try to harm 'her
But what happens when karma, turns right around and bites you?
And everything you stand for, turns on you, despite you?
What happens when you become the main source of her pain?
"Daddy look what I made", Dad's gotta go catch a plane
"Daddy where's Mommy? I can't find Mommy where is she?"
I don't know go play Hailie, baby, your Daddy's busy
Daddy's writing a song, this song ain't gonna write itself
I'll give you one underdog then you gotta swing by yourself
Then turn right around in that song and tell her you love her
And put hands on her mother, who's a spitting image of her
That's Slim Shady, yeah baby, Slim Shady's crazy
Shady made me, but tonight Shady's rocka-by-baby...

Class on Wednesday, November 7, we first went over our rough drafts that we turned last week.  I was glad that we got them because I really wanted to see how I did on this paper. When looking at the comments I realized I had a lot to work on. Then we went into the fairy tales, that were due and we had a neighbor read them and right down if we had everything. Then we started watching the movie twilight and the show vampire diaries. The movie and show are really popular so I have heard of them before but being a guy I really don’t like them all that much. 

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Wednesday, October 31^st, we came into class with our two page rough drafts done, for our research paper. We split into groups of five, to discuss and read each other’s paper, and give our feedback on them. After, I looked at the comments the readers made about my paper. When looking at the responses I realized that my paper need some work. My thesis is unclear, and my argument wasn't really told. I these group things that we do because it helps find more of my errors, before turning in my paper to be graded, but other than those problems, the paper over all was alright.