Wednesday, October 31^st, we came into class with our two page rough drafts done, for our research paper. We split into groups of five, to discuss and read each other’s paper, and give our feedback on them. After, I looked at the comments the readers made about my paper. When looking at the responses I realized that my paper need some work. My thesis is unclear, and my argument wasn't really told. I these group things that we do because it helps find more of my errors, before turning in my paper to be graded, but other than those problems, the paper over all was alright.